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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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The aim of this meeting is to work on how we can bridge the gap in our communication.

  

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That seems needlessly wordy. How about this? The aim of this meeting is to bridge the gap in our communication.

— Clive

  • That seems needlessly wordy.
  • How about this?
  • The aim of this meeting is to bridge the gap in our communication.
  • Or this?
  • The aim of this meeting is to improve our communication.
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That seems needlessly wordy.

How about this? The aim of this meeting is to bridge the gap in our communication.

Or this? The aim of this meeting is to improve our communication.

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