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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

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Michael didn't personally approach me, it was one of my ex-colleagues/partners who hadapproached me, likely because I could help the team and make the work process flow better.

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Deployment is the risk of joining the military, and I'm willing to take that risk, because it's something I want to accomplish for myself in my life.

Please change it so it's grammatically correct.

Thank you.
  

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Hi, Michael didn't personally approach me . I t was one of my ex-colleagues/partners who approached me, likely because I could help the team and make the work process flow better. The Past Perfect is not wrong in a context that justifies its use.

— Clive

  • Hi, Michael didn't personally approach me .
  • I t was one of my ex-colleagues/partners who approached me, likely because I could help the team and make the work process flow better.
  • The Past Perfect is not wrong in a context that justifies its use.
  • I don't see a context like that here.
  • And Deployment is the risk of joining the military, and I'm willing to take that ris k b ecause it's something I want to accomplish for myself in my life.
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Hi,

Michael didn't personally approach me. It was one of my ex-colleagues/partners who approached me, likely because I could help the team and make the work process flow better. The Past Perfect is not wrong in a context that justifies its use. I don't see a context like that her
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