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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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1. 1. We’ve ordered 100 units. 3 units will be sold mid Feb. Pls give us a 6 month term for the 2nd order. We’ll readjust the selling price later in the future if the currency changes.
2. 2. Pls provide us with a solid FAE in Taiwan and in China
3. 3 Were working on a software but we hope that in the future we’ll cooperate w/ making the software and use the same one.
4. 4 Also as per discussed, we’ll use advantech’s handheld device as the smallest product on our lineup.
1. 1. We’ve ordered 100 units. 3 units will be sold mid Feb. Pls give us a 6 month term for the 2nd order. We’ll readjust the selling price later in the future if the currency changes.
2. 2. Pls provide us with a solid FAE in Taiwan and in China
3. 3 Were working on a software but we hope that in the future we’ll cooperate w/ making the software and use the same one.
4. 4 Also as per discussed, we’ll use advantech’s handheld device as the smallest product on our lineup.
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Here are my suggestions. I spelled everything out, rather than abreviated the terms. However, I do not always understand what you want to say.
- Here are my suggestions.
- I spelled everything out, rather than abreviated the terms.
- However, I do not always understand what you want to say.
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Here are my suggestions. I spelled everything out, rather than abreviated the terms. However, I do not always understand what you want to say.
1. 1. We've ordered 100 units. 3 units will be sold mid Feb. Pls give us a 6 month term for the 2nd order. We'll readjust the selling price later in the future if the currency changes.
We've ordered 100 units. Thre
1. 1. We've ordered 100 units. 3 units will be sold mid Feb. Pls give us a 6 month term for the 2nd order. We'll readjust the selling price later in the future if the currency changes.
We've ordered 100 units. Thre
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