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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Hello, I need your help.... maybe someone can correct my paragraph? ((: I wrote it and I'd like to know if I made a mistakes... THANK YOu (:

Lithuania is very small country and my country can’t develop without relations with other countries so I think that business relations between Lithuania and Korea would be useful for development and economic of both countries.,In the future I believe that will be combined project and ect. where I might to apply my knowledge, experience and skills which I would get studying in Korea and I would help to develop collaborations between Lithuania and Korea.
  

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''Lithuania is a very small country and my country can't develop without relations with other countries so I think that a business relationship between Lithuania and Korea would be useful for development and economic of both countries. In the future, I believe that there will be a combined project, etc... Where I might apply my knowledge, experience and skills, I would get studying in Korea and help the collaborations between Lithuania and Korea develop''.

  • ''Lithuania is a very small country and my country can't develop without relations with other countries so I think that a business relationship between Lithuania and Korea would be useful for development and economic of both countries.
  • In the future, I believe that there will be a combined project, etc...
  • Where I might apply my knowledge, experience and skills, I would get studying in Korea and help the collaborations between Lithuania and Korea develop''.
  • I am still not sure whether my answer is extremely correct, it is better to get more results from others - GN.
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''Lithuania is a very small country and my country can't develop without relations with other countries so I think that a business relationship between Lithuania and Korea would be useful for development and economic of both countries. In the future, I believe that there will be a combined project, etc... Where I might apply my knowledge, experience and skills, I would get studying in Korea and h

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