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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
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Dear all

Could you please check it? Please tell me How should I write another way?

Thank you for your book renewal request. I am afraid that the books you want to request have been overdue since last week so we cannot reissue again. If you want to renew the book you can do it before or exact on the due date. Sorry for inconvenience caused.



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Thank you for your book renewal request, unfortunately we cannot reissue. The books you have borrowed were due to be returned last week and are now overdue. If you want to extend the loan period on books you have borrowed, you can do so before or on the due date.

  • Thank you for your book renewal request, unfortunately we cannot reissue.
  • The books you have borrowed were due to be returned last week and are now overdue.
  • If you want to extend the loan period on books you have borrowed, you can do so before or on the due date.
  • I apologise for any inconvenience caused.
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Thank you for your book renewal request, unfortunately we cannot reissue. The books you have borrowed were due to be returned last week and are now overdue. If you want to extend the loan period on books you have borrowed, you can do so before or on the due date. I apologise for any inconvenience caused.
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Thank you very much Dunfermline.

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