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Braveheart77 Posted 17 years ago
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Hi,

I want to send the below email to VIP clients, please correct or amend it to be in better structure:

Hello,

as you all aware that the migration is imminent more ever than before and for that reason I would like to assert on the following:

- the testing should be done in structured and proper way

so thats why I will urge you to complete this within next week and the deadline will be on Firday

thank you All and looking forward to hearing your feedback back at the earliest
  

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Hello, As you all aware , the migration is imminent, and I would like to make it clear that the testing should be done in a properly structured way. I urge you to complete this within the next week: the deadline will be Friday. Thank you all.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, As you all aware , the migration is imminent, and I would like to make it clear that the testing should be done in a properly structured way.
  • I urge you to complete this within the next week: the deadline will be Friday.
  • Thank you all.
  • I am looking forward to getting your feedback as soon as possible.
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Hello,

As you all aware, the migration is imminent, and I would like to make it clear that the testing should be done in a properly structured way. I urge you to complete this within the next week: the deadline will be Friday.

Thank you all. I am looking forward to getting your feedback as soon as possibl
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