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11b11span10I am looking forward to further my career in brand management. Although10,10 i have completed my MBA (Marketing), but to excel in such a specific area of Marketing, I need a course that is rigorous10 10and is specifically designed for students with similar needs. The most relevant course available for Brand Management is IMC (Integrated Marketing Communication). 10 10A course in IMC will10 10not only increase my knowledge of the fundamentals critical to Brand Management but also, as it10’10s name implies, help me integrate these fundamentals in practical work10.12span12b12br
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02br 01i 00Yes. I have underlined problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00I am 01u 00looking forward to further02u 00 my career in brand management. 01u 00Although, i 02u 00have completed my MBA (Marketing),01u 00 but02u 00 to excel in such a specific area of 01u 00Marketing02u 00, I need a course that is rigorous and is specifically designed for students with similar needs.

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  • 02br 01i 00Yes.
  • I have underlined problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00I am 01u 00looking forward to further02u 00 my career in brand management.
  • 01u 00Although, i 02u 00have completed my MBA (Marketing),01u 00 but02u 00 to excel in such a specific area of 01u 00Marketing02u 00, I need a course that is rigorous and is specifically designed for students with similar needs.
  • The most relevant course available for 01u 00Brand Management02u 00 is IMC (Integrated Marketing Communication).
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