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Chinni Posted 21 years ago
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please correct the following lines and send back

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Please find enclosed application for inclusion of my son’s name in Contributory Health Service Scheme along the copy of birth certificate. It is requested that an early action may please be taken to include Pradipth Goutham S. as a CHSS beneficiary, dependent of Pramila Kumari M.
  

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Hello Chinni. Welcome to English Forums. Your message looks pretty good: Please find enclosed an application for inclusion of my son’s name in the Contributory Health Service Scheme, along with a copy of his birth certificate.

  • Hello Chinni.
  • Welcome to English Forums.
  • Your message looks pretty good: Please find enclosed an application for inclusion of my son’s name in the Contributory Health Service Scheme, along with a copy of his birth certificate.
  • I would be grateful for an early inclusion of Pradipth Goutham S.
  • as a CHSS beneficiary, dependent of Pramila Kumari M.
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Hello Chinni. Welcome to English Forums. Your message looks pretty good:


Please find enclosed an application for inclusion of my son’s name in the Contributory Health Service Scheme, along with a copy of his birth certificate. I would be grateful for an early inclusion of Pradipth Goutham S. as a CHSS beneficiary, dependent of Pramila Kumari M.

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