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Bubu prasant Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
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hallo!
can any body correct this job application. Not the format but grammar and style only
Sub – Applying for the post of an announcer
Dear Sir,
Respectfully, I should like to bring to your kind notice that I am keenly interested in working in your esteemed department as a casual announcer.
Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be glad and honored to be given an opportunity to prove my worth in the field.
If you are kind enough to give me a chance I will certainly do my level best to work hard to the entire satisfaction of the authority and will never give them a reason to regret my selection.
My resume and other relevant documents are attached herewith.
thanks
Thanking you
can any body correct this job application. Not the format but grammar and style only
Sub – Applying for the post of an announcer
Dear Sir,
Respectfully, I should like to bring to your kind notice that I am keenly interested in working in your esteemed department as a casual announcer.
Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be glad and honored to be given an opportunity to prove my worth in the field.
If you are kind enough to give me a chance I will certainly do my level best to work hard to the entire satisfaction of the authority and will never give them a reason to regret my selection.
My resume and other relevant documents are attached herewith.
thanks
Thanking you
Top answer
Hi, I'm unfamiliar with the term "level best" and I don't know what a "casual announcer" is. Your application seems to be written in British English, which I'm also unfamiliar with, so I'm not sure about how to approach this. Thus, I'm only fairly sure that one sentence should be changed: Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be glad and honored to be given an opportunity to prove my worth in the field.
- Hi, I'm unfamiliar with the term "level best" and I don't know what a "casual announcer" is.
- Your application seems to be written in British English, which I'm also unfamiliar with, so I'm not sure about how to approach this.
- Thus, I'm only fairly sure that one sentence should be changed: Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be glad and honored to be given an opportunity to prove my worth in the field.
- #passive voice; change to: Since I have always been fascinated by this job, I would therefore be glad and honored to be given an opportunity to prove my worth in the field.
- Good luck on getting the job!
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Hi, I'm unfamiliar with the term "level best" and I don't know what a "casual announcer" is. Your application seems to be written in British English, which I'm also unfamiliar with, so I'm not sure about how to approach this. Thus, I'm only fairly sure that one sentence should be changed:
Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be gla
Since the above-mentioned job has always had a fascination on me I would therefore be gla
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