please corect my statement for university, Thank you!

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00I need your help in editing this letter since english is my second language.02br
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00Dear *******02br
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00Please consider my application for the Radiology Program, School of ****** offered by University of ********for the academic year 2007/2008. After completing the radiology program degree, I want to further my studies in Comprehensive Medical Imaging, a fascinating medical trade with heavy rolls in healthcare system.02br
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00I finished High School in ****01b00and I completed three years at ****** University of02b00****, ****** with the major in Computer Technology and Accounting. In May 2002, the American dream became a fact. Moving from *****to *******brought into my life many challenges but also many opportunities. In March 2004, when I was hired at **********I discovered radiology. I started from the bottom, as a Data Entry and I worked my way up as Accounts Payable, Payroll, and presently as Administrative Assistant for the Corporate Office. I have been working for the last 3 years with radiologists, x-ray technicians, ultrasound technicians, and managers from five states. This experience introduced me in the world of radiology and made me decide to enroll at *******, into Diagnostic Medical Sonography Program. From December 2005 to December 2006, when the program closed, I studied and developed my skills in abdominal ultrasound, vascular ultrasound and echocardiography. It was an intensive program for two years, five days a week. Last year, in December the program closed. The knowledge and the increased passion for medical imaging accrued in one year made this unfortunate event a powerful motivation to continue. 02br
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00I easily learn new things and I am open to new challenges. I am precise, dependable, hardworking and full of good attitude person, which in my opinion is very important in radiology trade. I enjoy working pressed for time and I am good at handling stress situations, where one has to act quickly and calmly. My strong interest in radiology was one of the major reasons why I have chosen to study at University of ***. Radiography program will be a great opportunity to get strong theoretical and clinical background to start my future career. 02br
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00Yours Sincerely,02br
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00Thank you for your help.0-