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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Please commnet/correct my Motivation letter for a job

0 Dear Correctors,02br
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00please have a look and comment/correct my motivation letter below. It is a motivation letter for a position in european institution, which focuses on human rights. the qualities they demand are these>02br
00Coordination02br
00Administration of events and activities02br
00Implementaton of projects by partners02br
00Networking –support02br
00Communication and organisational skills02br
00Team spirit02br
00Capacity to make sound, logical judgements02br
00Priorities,02br
00Flexibility02br
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00here is my letter:02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam02br
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00 I would like to apply for a position of Networks assistant as advertised by the XXXXX on January 3rd 2007. 02br
00My strong interest in human rights and their protection was one of the major reasons why I have chosen to study law. During my studies I gained valuable experience in this field by working for several NGOs. After my graduation I started to work as a project coordinator and legal advisor for XXXXX. 02br
005 years of working for XXX improved my capability to cope with many different tasks and provided me with various skills. In the course of my career in XXX I have successfully implemented several projects involving high level of coordination and networking as well as intensive communication with foreign and domestic partners. I was also responsible for relations with foreign partners - NGOs and networks in the field of anti-racism, but also international human rights monitoring bodies. I represented XXX at many international conferences and I coordinated preparation of 4 such conferences in Slovakia. Because of my strong dedication as well as my good presentation and communication skills XXX became active and well-respected member of many international networks and projects. This included the creation of XXX. 02br
00In the course of time I had become the chairman of XXX, which added another aspect to my professional experience. Coordination of other team members, ability to focus and prioritise, short-time and strategic planning were all necessary aspects of my daily tasks.02br
00Being an optimistic and creative team player with very good presentation skills and a wide range of interests, I am also able to work self-contained. Not only personal strengths in analytical thinking, organising and problem solving, but also very good communication skills and a long-standing familiarity with the complex issues of racism and human right in general make me feel being the right person for this position. 02br
00I am available for interview anytime, except for the period from February 24 till March 17 2007, when I would be on a study visit in the USA. 02br
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00Yours faithfully0-
  

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0Dear Sir/Madam02br 02br 00 I would like to apply for 01b 00the02b 00 position of Networks assistant as advertised 01b 00in02b 00 the *** on January 3rd 2007. 02br 02br 00My strong interest in human rights and their protection was one of the major reasons why I have chosen to study law. During my studies I gained valuable experience in this field by working for several NGOs.

  • 0Dear Sir/Madam02br 02br 00 I would like to apply for 01b 00the02b 00 position of Networks assistant as advertised 01b 00in02b 00 the *** on January 3rd 2007.
  • 02br 02br 00My strong interest in human rights and their protection was one of the major reasons why I have chosen to study law.
  • During my studies I gained valuable experience in this field by working for several NGOs.
  • After my graduation I started to work as a project coordinator and legal advisor for ***.
  • 02br 005 years of working for *** improved my 01del 00capability02del 00 01b 00ability to02b 00 cope with many different tasks and provided me with various skills.
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0Dear Sir/Madam02br
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00 I would like to apply for 01b00the02b00 position of Networks assistant as advertised 01b00in02b00 the *** on January 3rd 2007. 02br
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00My strong interest in human rights and their protection was one of the major reasons why I have chosen to study law. During my studies I gaine
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0 Thanks for your corrections.02br
00Exept for the gramatical mistakes, is it ok?0-

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