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Ben9108 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Please comments on the usage of "arrange"

I would like to seek comments on the usage of “Arrange” for the following sentences.

  1. With a view to developing staff, I arranged technical and safety courses hosted by manufacturers and safety council for team members to enhance the related knowledge.
  3. With a view to developing staff, I arranged for team members to attend technical and safety courses hosted by manufacturers and the safety council to enhance the related knowledge.
  

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That all seems too wordy to me. I suggest simply this. I arranged technical and safety courses for team members, taught by manufacturers and by the safety council.

— Clive

  • That all seems too wordy to me.
  • I suggest simply this.
  • I arranged technical and safety courses for team members, taught by manufacturers and by the safety council.
  • arranged is fine.
  • Clive
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That all seems too wordy to me. I suggest simply this.

I arranged technical and safety courses for team members, taught by manufacturers and by the safety council.

arranged is fine.

Clive

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