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Simonyys Posted 10 years ago
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please comment the sentences as below

Dear xxx,

Thank you very much for your proposal, after review and examine your proposal and I find that the return of the scheme is not attractive, sorry to inform you that I will not consider it.

Thank you for your effort.
  

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Dear ***, Thank you very much for your proposal. After reviewing it, I find that the return of the scheme is not attractive. I am sorry to inform you that I will not consider it further.

— Clive

  • Dear ***, Thank you very much for your proposal.
  • After reviewing it, I find that the return of the scheme is not attractive.
  • I am sorry to inform you that I will not consider it further.
  • Thank you for your effort.
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Dear ***,

Thank you very much for your proposal. After reviewing it, I find that the return of the scheme is not attractive. I am sorry to inform you that I will not consider it further.

Thank you for your effort.
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Thanks, Clive. It seems more clear by now.
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