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Rita Ngan Posted 6 years ago
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Please comment the grammatical mistakes.

Subject: <Project name is inserted here> - Payment Advice as at June 30th
Would you please advise how much money we will receive (our ref: 123456, John of B company) from company A tomorrow. Please locate the details on the data server for reference.

  

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Rita Ngan Would you please advise us of how much money we will receive (our ref: 123456, John of B company) from company A tomorrow. We usually do not use first names only in business correspondence. g.

  • Rita Ngan Would you please advise us of how much money we will receive (our ref: 123456, John of B company) from company A tomorrow.
  • We usually do not use first names only in business correspondence.
  • g.
  • John Williams / Mr.
  • Williams Rita Ngan Please locate the details on the data server for reference.
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Rita NganWould you please advise us of how much money we will receive (our ref: 123456, John of B company) from company A tomorrow.

We usually do not use first names only in business correspondence.

e.g. John Williams / Mr. Williams

Rita Ngan

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