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Vijay Marathe Posted 18 years ago
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Please comment on this one..

Experts,
Is the sentence making any sense?
The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting.
Thanks,
Vijay
  

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Hi, Is the sentence making any sense? The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting. It makes sense, but it doesn't really seem to tell us very much about health insurance.

  • Hi, Is the sentence making any sense?
  • The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting.
  • It makes sense, but it doesn't really seem to tell us very much about health insurance.
  • Clive
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Hi,
Is the sentence making any sense?
The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting.

It makes sense, but it doesn't really seem to tell us very much about health insurance.

Clive
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Thanks Clive,

I have followed it up by these sentences:

Health insurance companies rely on the concept of anti-selection. In a broad sense it means that the medically challenged people, expecting huge health-care expenses, are more likely to go in for a health insurance cover, than the physically fit people.

Does the earlier sentence now get supplemented with regards to
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Hi,
The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting.
I have followed it up by these sentences:

Health insurance companies rely on the concept of anti-selection. In a broad sense it means that the medically challenged people, expecting huge health-care expenses, are more likely t
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Hi,

I will make corrections in the articles as advised by you.

If this was the definition I referred to : http://actuarialwiki.org/~actuaria/index.php?title=Anti-selection, would my explanation of 'anti-selection' make sense?

And yes, I will remove the
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On second thought. I agree, the sentence : The profound considerations which have gone into the evolution of the concept of health insurance are interesting. ..is unnecessary.

Best regards,

Vijay

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