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Tomchin Posted 16 years ago
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Please comment on this MOM.
Dear Ali,
Please comment, am I using the correct format?
Date: 12/01/10
Venue: Meeting 1
Participants: Ali, Tong, Meng.
Discussion :
Utilize the meeting room (at the block A, ground floor) as traning room for customers training and in house training.
you have offered another area to us as you may need to use that meeting room for other purpose, but we prefer to have that room to keep our samples and demo units. therefore you need to discuss with your superior then come to us.
regards,
Meng
Please comment, am I using the correct format?
Date: 12/01/10
Venue: Meeting 1
Participants: Ali, Tong, Meng.
Discussion :
Utilize the meeting room (at the block A, ground floor) as traning room for customers training and in house training.
you have offered another area to us as you may need to use that meeting room for other purpose, but we prefer to have that room to keep our samples and demo units. therefore you need to discuss with your superior then come to us.
regards,
Meng
Top answer
There is no standard format. Yours is OK. I have underlined some problems: Date: 1 December 2010?
- There is no standard format.
- Yours is OK.
- I have underlined some problems: Date: 1 December 2010?
- 10 January 2010?
- Venue: Meeting 1 Participants: Ali, Tong, Meng.
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There is no standard format. Yours is OK. I have underlined some problems:
Date: 1 December 2010? 10 January 2010?
Venue: Meeting 1
Participants: Ali, Tong, Meng.
Discussion :
Utilize the meeting room (at the block A, ground floor) as traning room for customers training and in house training.
Date: 1 December 2010? 10 January 2010?
Venue: Meeting 1
Participants: Ali, Tong, Meng.
Discussion :
Utilize the meeting room (
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