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(Context: Toby is on a skateboard. He's already taken a tumble down one flight of stairs and is about to take another, encouraged by some bullies.)
Toby takes a deep breath, preparing himself for another hard tumble, as he rolls to the next flight of stairs, and off it?
Is this written okay? Is the commas put in the right places? Please comment.
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(Context: Toby is on a skateboard. ) Toby takes a deep breath, preparing himself for another hard tumble, as he rolls to the next flight of stairs, and off the top step. Is this written okay?
- (Context: Toby is on a skateboard.
- ) Toby takes a deep breath, preparing himself for another hard tumble, as he rolls to the next flight of stairs, and off the top step.
- Is this written okay?
- Yes, but with my edit above.
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(Context: Toby is on a skateboard. He's already taken a tumble down one flight of stairs and is about to take another, encouraged by some bullies.)
Toby takes a deep breath, preparing himself for another hard tumble, as he rolls to the next flight of stairs, and off the top step.
Is this written okay? Yes, but with my edit above.
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