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Simonyys Posted 9 years ago
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Please comment on the sentence, thanks

Thank you so much for inviting us, it was a great experience visiting your home, the meal is wonderful, we feel just like home.

We have planned this trip on early of this year, and finally, we're here, your hometown and our dream place.

  

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Okay, first of all, the first sentence is not a sentence but a string of separate sentences. Second, you need to put it in the same tense (not present and past). I put everything in the past because this sounds like an event that is now over.

  • Okay, first of all, the first sentence is not a sentence but a string of separate sentences.
  • Second, you need to put it in the same tense (not present and past).
  • I put everything in the past because this sounds like an event that is now over.
  • I would word it like this: Thank you so much for inviting us.
  • It was a great experience visiting your home and the meal was wonderful.
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Okay, first of all, the first sentence is not a sentence but a string of separate sentences. Second, you need to put it in the same tense (not present and past). I put everything in the past because this sounds like an event that is now over. I would word it like this:

Thank you so much for inviting us. It was a great experience visiting your home and the meal was wonderful. We r

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