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After discussing with our group members, we would like to join the Classical Tour with 4 star hotels for 5 days/ 4 nights as per your quotation on 22 May 2017. Please let me know how to make the payment for the tour.
One more thing I would like to ask for your help, as some of our group members are shutterbug. They would like to have some photogenic places and hopefully can be at nice places for sunset and sunrise on some of the days, can you arrange some places to fulfill their requirements.
Thank you for your cooperation.
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simonyys After discussing with our group members, we would like to join the Classical Tour with 4 star hotels for 5 days/ 4 nights as per your quotation on 22 May 2017. Quotation dated 22 May, unless the the tour starts on the 22nd. To be on the safe side, you may want to add "The tour will start on 17 June at 9am.
- simonyys After discussing with our group members, we would like to join the Classical Tour with 4 star hotels for 5 days/ 4 nights as per your quotation on 22 May 2017.
- Quotation dated 22 May, unless the the tour starts on the 22nd.
- To be on the safe side, you may want to add "The tour will start on 17 June at 9am.
- " Please let me know how to make the payment for the tour.
- One more thing I would like to ask for your help ,: A s some of our group members are shutterbug s, t hey would like to have some photogenic places and hopefully can be at nice places for sunset and sunrise on some of the days .
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simonyysAfter discussing with our group members, we would like to join the Classical Tour with 4 star hotels for 5 days/ 4 nights as per your quotation on 22 May 2017.
Quotation dated 22 May, unless the the tour starts on the 22nd.
To be on the safe side, you may want to add "The tour will start on 17 June
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