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Tomchin Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please comment on my sentence.

I believe, We have to extend the timeline of the Project A as I am working on the Project B now which fall into the same timeline with the Project A and next week I also involve in 3 days ABC training for customer. Perhaps the Project A the timeline's could be extended for another 2 more weeks incase of the project couldn't complete on time. Please advise.
  

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Hi, I believe, We have to extend the timeline of the Project A as I am working on the Project B now which fall into the same timeline with the Project A and next week I also involve in 3 days ABC training for customer. Perhaps the Project A the timeline's could be extended for another 2 more weeks incase of the project couldn't complete on time. Please advise.

  • Hi, I believe, We have to extend the timeline of the Project A as I am working on the Project B now which fall into the same timeline with the Project A and next week I also involve in 3 days ABC training for customer.
  • Perhaps the Project A the timeline's could be extended for another 2 more weeks incase of the project couldn't complete on time.
  • Please advise.
  • I believe we have to extend the timeline of Project A, as it conflicts with my work on Project B.
  • In addition, next week I am also involved in 3 days of ABC training for the customer.
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Hi,

I believe, We have to extend the timeline of the Project A as I am working on the Project B now which fall into the same timeline with the Project A and next week I also involve in 3 days ABC training for customer. Perhaps the Project A the timeline's could be extended for another 2 more weeks incase of the project couldn't complete on time. Please advise.

I believe we have
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thanks for your prompt reply, I have a few things to clarify with you.

(Can you explain why you remove the following word and the sentence from the essay which in red)

1.for another 2 more weeks.
2.incase of the project couldn't complete on time.
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Hi,

(Can you explain why you remove the following word and the sentence from the essay which in red)

1.for another 2 more weeks.

'Another' conveys the idea of 'more'. Saying both words is not wrong, but is rather unnecessary.

2.incase of the project couldn't complete on time.

Correct grammar for this phrase is in case the project c

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