Please comment on my references

Hello,

im planing an semester in the US and for the exchange program in need two referenve letters from my supervisors. Unfortunately they arent that good in english, and mine isn't perfect either. So i hoped somenone here could help me to eradicte some typical non-english-errors or give some advise (everything is helpful), so feel free to comment! Thanks a lot in advantage!

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This reference letter is provided at the request of “rdnzl”, who has asked me to serve as a reference on his behalf.

I know “rdnzl” from my lectures since April 2006. During this time I have known him as an intelligent, reliable and open student who is eager to learn. He visited my following lectures: design, engineering-mechanics and machine-elements at the “UMRK University”.

During my lectures “rdnzl” always was concentrated and followed the lecture’s topic without problems. Especially in both of my engineering-courses he demonstrated his mechanical understanding by passing both tests with an A grade. He is also able to solve complex task even under tight deadlines, which he showed in different project thesis during the semester, which he accomplished with great initiative.

On the social side “rdnzl” is a responsible and trustworthy person, who is able to work in a team and if necessary taking the lead. Also he is able to help his fellow students if needed.

I’m pleased to recommend “rdnzl” for the UMRK Exchange Program as a dependable and consistent person. If you want to have further information concerning his qualification, please feel free to contact my

Yours sincerely

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Dear Sir or Madam,

“rdnzl” has asked to recommend him to for the “UMRK” Exchange Program. After a short discussion about the Program itself I was delighted that he will take challenge to deepen his engineering skill abroad.

I Know the Student since Fall 2006 when he first visited my thermodynamic lecture. He demonstrated a good technical understanding for the basics of thermodynamics and was also able to comprehend further theories and developments concerning the proceeding of the matter. Although he had a C grade he was among the best 20 percent who had passed this exam.

In both Semesters I noticed him as a keen and intelligent student who is able to understand complex coherences and responds well to intellectually demanding situations. I know that if given the chance to participate at the Exchange program he will be aware of the challenges and prepare very well

Yours faithfully

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