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Please comment my CV for an intership
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01 span 00 Could someone please comment my CV for an intership in management department of a fashion company (formatting has changed while posting). In printed version it fits accurately 1 page. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Thank you very much in advance. Any kind of comments from anybody who have someething to say about my work are welcome! 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 P.S. They also ask a photo apart from CV. Does someone have an idea of what kind of photo should I send (full-sized, colored, pretty-faced or very formal one). I need to send pdf-format of CV by e-mail. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Looking forward to your suggestions... 02 span 02 br
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00 01 b 00 Name Surname 02 b 02 br
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00 Address in Country 2 XXXXX 02 br
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00 E-mail 01 a 00 Email Removed 00 " mce_href="mailto: 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 00 "> 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 02 a 02 br
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01 b 00 Skills and Attributes 02 b 02 br
00 · Creative, innovative, flexible 02 br
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00 · Determined, optimistic, intelligent 02 br
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00 · Exceptional analytical skills 02 br
00 · Natural leadership abilities 02 br
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00 · Strong team player 02 br
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00 · Energetic self-starter 02 br
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00 B University, degree in business administration, third year. 02 br
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00 Average grade: 29.2 / 30. 02 br
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00 Projects accomplished with maximum grade: Key success factors of Fashion Sector Company, Brand Identity in Fashion Sector. 02 br
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00 Sept 2000 – Jul 2005 02 br
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00 City State University, Institute of Management and Economics, major – International Economics, graduation with honors. 02 br
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00 Term papers: Inflation and Unemployment, Analysis of Company’s Economical Activity, Transnational Banks, Banking Service Marketing. 02 br
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00 Sept 1995 – Jul 2000 02 br
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00 Lyceum of Business-Information Technologies. Graduation with honors. 02 br
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01 u 00 Event Manager, Assistant Director 02 u 00 , Auto center X. A full-time position for the largest center Ford in the region. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
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00 · Organized an opening event on a city scale 02 br
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00 · Developed and handled database of VIP potential clients 02 br
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00 · Managed customer service by means of various communication tools 02 br
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00 Feb 2005 to Sept 2005 02 br
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01 u 00 Finance Department Manager 02 u 00 , Y Ltd. A full-time position for the production company. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
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00 · Developed business-plan for the Brick Manufacturing Plant 02 br
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00 · Collected and interpreted survey data on potential costumers and rivals 02 br
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00 · Conducted negotiations with key potential customers 02 br
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00 Aug 2004 – Nov 2004 02 br
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01 u 00 Securities Department Manager 02 u 00 , N Bank JSC. A part-time position for the local banking institution. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
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00 · Monitored daily equity market situation 02 br
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00 · Arranged deals on stocks and bonds trading 02 br
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00 · Issued and discounted bills of exchange 02 br
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00 May 2003 – Nov 2003 02 br
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01 u 00 Retail Customers Department Manager 02 u 00 , M-bank JSC. A part-time position for a large national banking institution. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
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00 · Accomplished money transfers and opened deposits 02 br
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00 · Issued and handled plastic credit cards 02 br
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00 · Conducted consulting services 02 br
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01 span 00 Could someone please comment my CV for an intership in management department of a fashion company (formatting has changed while posting). In printed version it fits accurately 1 page. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Thank you very much in advance. Any kind of comments from anybody who have someething to say about my work are welcome! 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 P.S. They also ask a photo apart from CV. Does someone have an idea of what kind of photo should I send (full-sized, colored, pretty-faced or very formal one). I need to send pdf-format of CV by e-mail. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Looking forward to your suggestions... 02 span 02 br
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00 01 b 00 Name Surname 02 b 02 br
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00 Personal Data 02 h2
00 Date and place of birth 01 /01 /19XX, Country 1 02 br02 br
00 Address in Country 2 XXXXX 02 br
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00 Telephone 01 span 00 <removed by mod> 02 span 02 br
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00 E-mail 01 a 00 Email Removed 00 " mce_href="mailto: 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 00 "> 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 02 a 02 br
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01 b 00 Skills and Attributes 02 b 02 br
00 · Creative, innovative, flexible 02 br
02 br
00 · Determined, optimistic, intelligent 02 br
02 br
00 · Exceptional analytical skills 02 br
00 · Natural leadership abilities 02 br
02 br
00 · Strong team player 02 br
02 br
00 · Energetic self-starter 02 br
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00 Education 02 h2
00 Sept 2005 to present 02 br02 br
00 B University, degree in business administration, third year. 02 br
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00 Average grade: 29.2 / 30. 02 br
02 br
00 Projects accomplished with maximum grade: Key success factors of Fashion Sector Company, Brand Identity in Fashion Sector. 02 br
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00 Sept 2000 – Jul 2005 02 br
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00 City State University, Institute of Management and Economics, major – International Economics, graduation with honors. 02 br
02 br
00 Term papers: Inflation and Unemployment, Analysis of Company’s Economical Activity, Transnational Banks, Banking Service Marketing. 02 br
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00 Sept 1995 – Jul 2000 02 br
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00 Lyceum of Business-Information Technologies. Graduation with honors. 02 br
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00 Work Experience 02 h2
00 Jun 2006 – Aug 2006 02 br02 br
01 u 00 Event Manager, Assistant Director 02 u 00 , Auto center X. A full-time position for the largest center Ford in the region. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
02 br
00 · Organized an opening event on a city scale 02 br
02 br
00 · Developed and handled database of VIP potential clients 02 br
02 br
00 · Managed customer service by means of various communication tools 02 br
02 br
00 Feb 2005 to Sept 2005 02 br
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01 u 00 Finance Department Manager 02 u 00 , Y Ltd. A full-time position for the production company. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
02 br
00 · Developed business-plan for the Brick Manufacturing Plant 02 br
02 br
00 · Collected and interpreted survey data on potential costumers and rivals 02 br
02 br
00 · Conducted negotiations with key potential customers 02 br
02 br
00 Aug 2004 – Nov 2004 02 br
02 br
01 u 00 Securities Department Manager 02 u 00 , N Bank JSC. A part-time position for the local banking institution. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
02 br
00 · Monitored daily equity market situation 02 br
02 br
00 · Arranged deals on stocks and bonds trading 02 br
02 br
00 · Issued and discounted bills of exchange 02 br
02 br
00 May 2003 – Nov 2003 02 br
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01 u 00 Retail Customers Department Manager 02 u 00 , M-bank JSC. A part-time position for a large national banking institution. Responsibilities and achievements: 02 br
02 br
00 · Accomplished money transfers and opened deposits 02 br
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00 · Issued and handled plastic credit cards 02 br
02 br
00 · Conducted consulting services 02 br
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00 Languages 02 h2
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- 00 Native Russian 02 li 01 li
- 00 Proficient English 02 li 01 li
- 00 Pre-advanced Italian 02 li 01 li
- 00 Passive German 02 li 02 ul
00 Computer Skills 02 h2
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- 00 Fluent in all Windows and MS-Office versions, Internet applications, ECDL 02 li 02 ul
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01 h201 b 00 Interests 02 b 02 h2
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- 00 Fashion, psychology, communication, cultures, information technology 02 li 01 li
- 00 Participating and organizing social activities and events, traveling, yoga 02 li 02 ul
Top answer
0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 00 There's something odd about the way you have formatted your post. 02 br 02 br 00 Thanks, Clive 0-
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 00 There's something odd about the way you have formatted your post.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 There's something odd about the way you have formatted your post. Please try to post it again, so that I can read it more easily. 02 br
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00 Thanks, Clive 0-
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00 There's something odd about the way you have formatted your post. Please try to post it again, so that I can read it more easily. 02 br
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00 Thanks, Clive 0-
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0 Dear Clive, 02 br
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00 I have already posted it using my old account of Siberian_Girl ( 01 a 05 0 00 02 a 00 ). So I'd be very grateful if you could look at it and comment. Thanks a lot, 02 br
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00 Best Regards, 02 br
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00 P.S. I have
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00 I have already posted it using my old account of Siberian_Girl ( 01 a 05 0 00 02 a 00 ). So I'd be very grateful if you could look at it and comment. Thanks a lot, 02 br
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00 Best Regards, 02 br
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I toook a quick look at your other post, but the actual text is in an attached file. I find it a lot easier to work with text that is right in the post, because an attached file is harder to edit directly. 02 br
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00 I see you already have received some comments there. If you want more, at least from me, perhaps you could just paste your t
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00 I toook a quick look at your other post, but the actual text is in an attached file. I find it a lot easier to work with text that is right in the post, because an attached file is harder to edit directly. 02 br
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00 I see you already have received some comments there. If you want more, at least from me, perhaps you could just paste your t
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0 Dear Clive, 02 br
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00 For sure I'd like to receive more comments, and also from you as the forum Guru. But the problem is the format of my CV: it is a table. So when I copy and paste it into the post I receive the result you see above. If you do not mind, I will send you via e-mail the Word-version of the CV to reveiw it. I'd be very grateful for any comments you could
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00 For sure I'd like to receive more comments, and also from you as the forum Guru. But the problem is the format of my CV: it is a table. So when I copy and paste it into the post I receive the result you see above. If you do not mind, I will send you via e-mail the Word-version of the CV to reveiw it. I'd be very grateful for any comments you could
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0 Hi again, 02 br
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00 I'm happy to have a look at your CV if you wish. 05 0 00 However, I prefer to do it in the open forum rather than privately. That way, others can learn, too. 02 br
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00 It's best if you do a little cutting and pasting to put it here, if you are able to take the time. 02 br
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00 Best wishes again, Clive 010id
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00 I'm happy to have a look at your CV if you wish. 05 0 00 However, I prefer to do it in the open forum rather than privately. That way, others can learn, too. 02 br
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00 It's best if you do a little cutting and pasting to put it here, if you are able to take the time. 02 br
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00 Best wishes again, Clive 010id
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0 Dear Clive, 02 br
00 I finally managed to copy the CV without table borders. Formatting is different, but the text is the same. 02 br
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00 Hope you would have some free minutes to give a close look at it. 02 br
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00 Thank you, 02 br
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00 SGirl 02 br
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00 I finally managed to copy the CV without table borders. Formatting is different, but the text is the same. 02 br
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00 Hope you would have some free minutes to give a close look at it. 02 br
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00 Thank you, 02 br
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0 Hi again, 02 br
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00 I've made quite a few suggestions. These are based on how one would write this in Canada. Here, we would call it a resume rather than a CV. 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Clive 02 br
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00 I've made quite a few suggestions. These are based on how one would write this in Canada. Here, we would call it a resume rather than a CV. 02 br
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0 ... Great! Thaks a lot, Clive. 02 br
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00 I haven't even dreamt of such a deep analysis of my CV for my first English intenship. It will for sure help me in applying for the future permanent job. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much! 02 br
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00 Kindest regards, 02 br
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00 I haven't even dreamt of such a deep analysis of my CV for my first English intenship. It will for sure help me in applying for the future permanent job. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much! 02 br
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00 Kindest regards, 02 br
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Manama, Ajman
United Arab Emirates
My Objectives
I am seeking a responsible position as a Receptionist/ Secretary in a well reputed organization.
Personal Details
· Date of Birth: 31-8-1981
· Nationality: Pakistani
· Gender: Female
· Address: Al Manama, Ajman
Educational Experience
· 2004 - Com
United Arab Emirates
My Objectives
I am seeking a responsible position as a Receptionist/ Secretary in a well reputed organization.
Personal Details
· Date of Birth: 31-8-1981
· Nationality: Pakistani
· Gender: Female
· Address: Al Manama, Ajman
Educational Experience
· 2004 - Com
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The best place to check your CV is www.cvwordchecker.com
It is free of charge and you do not have to install or download anything. Very clever !!
I tried it on your CV. Interesting result
It is free of charge and you do not have to install or download anything. Very clever !!
I tried it on your CV. Interesting result
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