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Rita Ngan Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Please comment grammatical mistake

Subject: ABC Engineering Limited - Clarification of Invoice Amount HKD123,456.00

Dear Mr. Smith,

On 24 Jan 2022, your company paid HKD123,456.00 into our bank 123-456789-001 (see attached).

After checked, that HKD123,456.00 was found unknown.

Would you please provide us with the relevant supporting document for our settlement.

Your reply would be appreciated.

Best regards,

  

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00 was found unknown. It is not clear. The second sentence contradicts who you state in the first sentence.

  • 00 was found unknown.
  • It is not clear.
  • The second sentence contradicts who you state in the first sentence.
  • was found unknown ", which is totally unclear and unnatural, to mean the money did not credited into your account)
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Rita NganOn 24 Jan 2022, your company paid HKD123,456.00 into our bank 123-456789-001 (see attached).After checked, that HKD123,456.00 was found unknown.

It is not clear. The second sentence contradicts who you state in the first sentence.

(I assume "....was found unknown", which is totally unclear and unnatural, to mean the money did not cred

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Subject: ABC Engineering Limited - Clarification of Invoice Number for Amount HKD123,456.00 Payment Received.

Dear Mr. Smith,

On 24 Jan 2022, your company paid HKD123,456.00 into our bank account 123-456789-001 (see attache

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