Please comment and give me a band score for my Ielts Writing Task 1

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Link of the chart: https://bom.to/EBMGK8kryWzCF

This bar chart illustrates the PPM of three causes from four countries in 2021.

The total of PPM in China is the highest number, opposite that, Australia have the lowest total. In addiction, the total of PPM from industry is the largest and the lowest is electricity generation.

In China, the industry PPM is 80, next, 70 is the number of transport and the generation of electricity PPM is just under 60. Secondly, about the industry, the PPM of China is 80, America is just under 30, in Japan is well over 40 and Australia is just under 20.

In Australia, the PPM of industry is approximately 18, it is the same number to transport and electricity generation is about 19. The last, about the generation of electricity, China is around 58 to 59, America is 30, Japan is roughly 14 to 15 and Australia is just under 20. That is some number of air pollution in some countries in the world.

Thank you!