Please comment and edit my Cover letter.

Dear

I am applying for the MSC progarm in Global Innovation management. The university has asked to sens Cover letter in application process.

I typed my CL, which i had written few lines.

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Dear Sir / Madam,



I always thought that in present scenario management concepts are necessary with technology for the good product development. I aspire to acquire knowledge in innovation management so as to learn tools necessary to transform research outputs into innovative products. Through Erasmus Mundas Program, I came to know about the Master’s Program in ‘Global Innovation Management’ (GIM) and very interested to apply for the program. After thorough search of program contents, partner university websites and discussion with Mr. Ross Maclachlan, I am confident that the program is more suitable to me to achieve my career goal of entering into technology management field.





I graduated in Chemical Engineering and acquired considerable knowledge in process engineering concepts. My academic project in refining of crude oil process has helped me to know the latest technological trends and also the concept development process. I researched to find the latest technologies in crude oil cracking, separation techniques, design of process and preliminary costs involved in the project.





I later joined Reliance Life Sciences through competitive Young Engineers’ Program. During the tenure in Reliance, I mainly involved in validation activities of Bio-pharma facility from start to completion and mainly helped to learn new technologies. My main responsibilities are project planning, development of specifications for equipment, qualification for Design and Function so as to comply with quality standards."

Please comment and edit for necessary.

Regards,

Anil Kumar.