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Zymos Posted 21 years ago
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Hello,
Can someone please check on the following sentences:
You were asked to rush a report out with only 30 minutes to spare. You wrote down whatever comes to mind. You then placed the draft on your boss's desk. Minutes later, he summoned you to his office and handed you back the draft with a remark, “Please rewrite your report.”
Any grammatcial errors ?
Thanks,
Zym
Can someone please check on the following sentences:
You were asked to rush a report out with only 30 minutes to spare. You wrote down whatever comes to mind. You then placed the draft on your boss's desk. Minutes later, he summoned you to his office and handed you back the draft with a remark, “Please rewrite your report.”
Any grammatcial errors ?
Thanks,
Zym
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Two things: comes to mind should be came to mind (inconsistent verb) I would say 'the remark' instead of 'a remark'.
- Two things: comes to mind should be came to mind (inconsistent verb) I would say 'the remark' instead of 'a remark'.
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Two things:
comes to mind should be came to mind (inconsistent verb)
I would say 'the remark' instead of 'a remark'.
comes to mind should be came to mind (inconsistent verb)
I would say 'the remark' instead of 'a remark'.
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