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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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0Health minister Anbumani Ramadoss is very concerned about what he calls the negative impact of movie scenes where heroes drink alcohol on young.02br
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00No there is an error in grammar and an infelicity in structure-- it should read:01i02br
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0No, 'on young' doesn't work. Perhaps you could reword it this way instead:02br
00Health minister Anbumani Ramadoss is very concerned that movie scenes in which heroes drink alcohol have a negative impact on young people.0-
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0Thanks Yankee and MM0-

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