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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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please chek my motivation
Stuttgart University
June 28, 2015
Dear Selection Committee:
I was very glad when I saw this particular opportunity to apply for a Master program in Computer Science Engineering and with this letter I would like to express my strong motivation for this master course.
In high school I graduated with mathematics and physics as my majors. I am continuing my academic career with the study of "Computer Science Engineering" at Khayyam University of Mashhad. In February 2014 I graduated with a degree in Computer Hardware and my GPA is 15.62 and I was top student for three semester (Term Average over 17/20).
My personal interest in language drove me to learning different languages, I’ve learned Arabic at school and studied English for 8 years, and Deutsch for 2 years. Knowing different languages led to different cultures get to know.
Complementing my strong academic performance are my advanced skills in leadership and communication. In several of the projects during my studies, I was the team leader responsible for building and leading our project team. As the team leader, I was responsible for not only my mathematics and computer science area of expertise, but also distributing project assignments and responsibilities as well as governing interpersonal relationships.
After careful overview of the master program you are offering with at your University, I believe that curricula fully suits my intentions, and therefore I would like to get an opportunity to attend this program. I want to study at Stuttgart University because of your outstanding educational system, focus on gathering relevant work experience, and your excellent facilities. From speaking with students and professors from your university and other universities, I am confident of my decision.
At the end I would like to point out that I am determined to make the most of this opportunity. I believe that being a student in your department would not only empower my career development, but would give me the framework to utilize my full potentials. Moreover I feel that as a Masters student at your University, I can benefit from the numerous challenging career opportunities.
June 28, 2015
Dear Selection Committee:
I was very glad when I saw this particular opportunity to apply for a Master program in Computer Science Engineering and with this letter I would like to express my strong motivation for this master course.
In high school I graduated with mathematics and physics as my majors. I am continuing my academic career with the study of "Computer Science Engineering" at Khayyam University of Mashhad. In February 2014 I graduated with a degree in Computer Hardware and my GPA is 15.62 and I was top student for three semester (Term Average over 17/20).
My personal interest in language drove me to learning different languages, I’ve learned Arabic at school and studied English for 8 years, and Deutsch for 2 years. Knowing different languages led to different cultures get to know.
Complementing my strong academic performance are my advanced skills in leadership and communication. In several of the projects during my studies, I was the team leader responsible for building and leading our project team. As the team leader, I was responsible for not only my mathematics and computer science area of expertise, but also distributing project assignments and responsibilities as well as governing interpersonal relationships.
After careful overview of the master program you are offering with at your University, I believe that curricula fully suits my intentions, and therefore I would like to get an opportunity to attend this program. I want to study at Stuttgart University because of your outstanding educational system, focus on gathering relevant work experience, and your excellent facilities. From speaking with students and professors from your university and other universities, I am confident of my decision.
At the end I would like to point out that I am determined to make the most of this opportunity. I believe that being a student in your department would not only empower my career development, but would give me the framework to utilize my full potentials. Moreover I feel that as a Masters student at your University, I can benefit from the numerous challenging career opportunities.
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You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs, more than you have done, so far.
- You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs, more than you have done, so far.
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You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs, more than you have done, so far.
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Dear Sir/Madam, Selection Committee:
I was very glad when I saw this particular opportunity to apply for the Masterprogram in Computer Science Engineering program at your prestigious university, and with this letter I would like to express my strong outline my motivation for this master course.
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