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Emad559 Posted 19 years ago
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00Note: 01b01font00red words02font02b00 are names02br
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00Tow night ago was 01b01font00chele02font02b00 night. I will say about this night for you. In 010200, we have good days and good nights. Some of them are devout for eg 01b01font00eade fetr02font02b00 and some of them are tradition for eg 01b01font00eade nouroz02font02b00 or 01b01font00chahar shanbe sori02font02b00 night.02br
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01b01font00Chele02font02b00 night is of second kind. This night is the highest night of the other night on year.02br
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00Age-old Iranian from the past cherished this night. Now, we cherish this night such as our ancestor.02br
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00But this night has especial folklore that we say about some of them.02br
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00In this night father and mother with their boys go to grandfather's house00 and then they greet to together this night. Grandmother or grandfather says for us a story.02br
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00Also this night has especial edible such as especial 01b01font00agil02font02b00 00,watermelon pumpkin and many other things. Plus popcorn that we bought amount of it for you. 02br
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00At the end, we should understand and respect to our folklore because they're some of our dictionary. So when we respect to our dictionary, such as we respect to our self.0-
  

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0 00Two nights ago it was 01b01font00chele02font02b00 night. I will tell you about this night. In Iran, we have good days and good nights.(I dont understand your use of 'good' here. Do you mean holidays or special days?) Some of them are devout for example 01b01font00eade fetr02font0
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0thanks nona of you02br
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00but please check sentences again02br
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001-we have00 holidays02br
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002-This night is the highest night in the year.02br
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003-fathers and mothers with their children00 00go to the grandparents' house02br
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01. ok02br
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002. We don't describe nights as 'high'. do you mean it is the highlight of the year?02br
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004. ok02br
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005. No, I don't understand. You are buying popcorn for someone else? Why are you using the word popcorn twice - that is what is making it confusing. Plus popcorn that we bo
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1font01b00do you mean it is the highlight of the year?02b02font02br
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