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JKBelieve Posted 19 years ago
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Please check whether this sentence is grammatically correct
0 I am pretty sure this sentence has no problems but I just wanted to be sure and EnglishForward was the only place I trusted the most. So please have a look and tell me whether it needs any improvements or not. This is for a script of a play. 02 br
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00 '(Man looking at Wife) I thank God everyday for having blessed me with such a beauty because of whom even the brightest stars in the nightsky dim in comparison.' 02 br
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00 Oh and one more thing, 02 br
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00 'Even the flowers wilt for jealousy of your beauty' 02 br
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00 Is using 'for' in front of 'jealousy' grammatically correct and idiomatic? 0-
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00 '(Man looking at Wife) I thank God everyday for having blessed me with such a beauty because of whom even the brightest stars in the nightsky dim in comparison.' 02 br
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00 Oh and one more thing, 02 br
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00 'Even the flowers wilt for jealousy of your beauty' 02 br
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00 Is using 'for' in front of 'jealousy' grammatically correct and idiomatic? 0-
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02 font 00 Yes, it's fine. 02 br 02 br 00 Best wishes, Clive 0-
- 02 font 00 Yes, it's fine.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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01 font 00 (Man looking at Wife) I thank *** every day for having blessed me with such a beauty, beside whom even the brightest stars in the night sky dim in comparison.' 02 font 00 I made just a couple of small adjustments. 02 br
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01 font 00 Oh and one more thing, 02 font 0
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01 font 00 (Man looking at Wife) I thank *** every day for having blessed me with such a beauty, beside whom even the brightest stars in the night sky dim in comparison.' 02 font 00 I made just a couple of small adjustments. 02 br
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01 font 00 Oh and one more thing, 02 font 0
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