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As another school year begins, the Lasallian mission of providing quality education to our less privileged countrymen shall be carried on. In this light, I’m pleased to submit my recommendation for the new applicants of our school’s scholarship program.



Attached are the following reports and summary of the interview made with the students. Moreover, I have arranged the following files order of precedence so as to identify our priority among the applicants.



May we continue to serve our community, and aid in nation building, by serving the needs of the poor and underprivileged through education.
  

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Hi, As another school year begins, the Lasallian mission of providing quality education to our less privileged countrymen shall be carried on. In this light, I am pleased to submit my recommendation conc erning the new applicants for our school’s scholarship program. Attached are the reports and summary of the interview s held with the students.

  • Hi, As another school year begins, the Lasallian mission of providing quality education to our less privileged countrymen shall be carried on.
  • In this light, I am pleased to submit my recommendation conc erning the new applicants for our school’s scholarship program.
  • Attached are the reports and summary of the interview s held with the students.
  • Moreover, I have arranged the following files in order of preference so as to identify our priority among the applicants.
  • May we continue to serve our community, and aid in nation building, by serving the needs of the poor and underprivileged through education.
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Hi,

As another school year begins, the Lasallian mission of providing quality education to our less privileged countrymen shall be carried on. In this light, I am pleased to submit my recommendation concerning the new applicants for our school’s
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thanks, clive! really appreciate it you're the best!
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After looking at Clive's post and getting some help, I wrote this.

As another school year rolls in/begins, the Lasallian mission of providing quality education to our less previleged countrymen shall be carried on. In this light, I am pleased to submit my recommendation concerning the new applicants of our school's scholarship program.

Attached are the reports and summary of t
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Thank you.

I sometimes have difficulty in determining which one (sorry) to use when being asked to make a choice between "for something" and "concerning something." Can you help
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Hi,

'For an application' sounds like you are writing to ask me to send you an application form.

'Concerning an application' sounds like you want to discuss an application.

It would be easier to comment if you could supply a context where you want to use each of these phrases.

Best wishes, Clive

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