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0 00The Indian media, specially the Hindi news channels lack maturity. It seems they have forgotten profession journalism and adapted it to be proactive journalism. They take up the current topic / issue, mix it with the recipe to sell it in the market as hot dog. Dramatization of event is what increases their channels TRP. 00 0-
  

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1span 00The Indian media, 01font 00e02font 00specially the Hindi news channels, lack01font 00s02font 00 maturity. It seems 01font 00it has (the Indian media) 02font 01del 00they have02del 00 forgotten profession01font 00al02font 00 journalism and adapted it to be proactive journalism. 01font 00It 02font 02span 01span 01font 00(the Indian media) 02font 02span 01span 01del 00They02del 00 take01font 00s 02font 00up the current topic / issue 01font 00and02font 00 mix01font 00es02font 00 it with 01font 00commercialism 02font 00(the recipe) to sell it in the market as01font 00/like a02font 00 hot dog.

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  • 1span 00The Indian media, 01font 00e02font 00specially the Hindi news channels, lack01font 00s02font 00 maturity.
  • It seems 01font 00it has (the Indian media) 02font 01del 00they have02del 00 forgotten profession01font 00al02font 00 journalism and adapted it to be proactive journalism.
  • 01font 00It 02font 02span 01span 01font 00(the Indian media) 02font 02span 01span 01del 00They02del 00 take01font 00s 02font 00up the current topic / issue 01font 00and02font 00 mix01font 00es02font 00 it with 01font 00commercialism 02font 00(the recipe) to sell it in the market as01font 00/like a02font 00 hot dog.
  • 02br 00Do your comments apply to all of these or are you talking only about TV news channels?
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1span00The Indian media, 01font00e02font00specially the Hindi news channels, lack01font00s02font00 maturity. It seems 01font00it has (the Indian media) 02font01del00they have02del00 forgotten profession01f
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0 I want to talk specifically, hindi news channels02br
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00one more thing 02br
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00the Hindi news channels, lack01font00s02font00 maturity02br
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00I used lack because I considered, the Hindi news channels as one unit, is that approach was wrong?0-
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0 Hi, I used lacks referring to 01i00the Indian media02i00 at the start of the sentence.02br
00As I said, the term 01i00media02i00 covers all forms, TV, radio, newspapers, magazines etc. If you want to talk specifically about TV news channels I would suggest using: TV news media/ TV news. 02br
00I would rewrite as follows
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0Hi,02br
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00but if we read first line 02br
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00The Indian media, 01font00e02font00specially the Hindi news channels, lack01font00s02font00 maturity.02br
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00I started with the Indian media and then specified that the Hindi news channels,
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0 The Indian media, especially the Hindi news channels, lack maturity - on reflection I think this is ok. 02br
00I have found both of the following used02br
00The media is .................02br
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00The media are ............... 0-
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