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Egyptian2007 Posted 18 years ago
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Please check this statement
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01 b 00 "The head teacher does not provide opportunities for participation to teachers because she is bound by ministerial decrees. We may make unsound decisions that would lead to mistakes and then sanctions will apply to the whole administrative staff including the head teacher and the deputy heads. Hence, sharing does not happen, simply because everybody is concerned about his/her own safety" 02 b 0-
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00 Thanks. 02 br
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01 b 00 "The head teacher does not provide opportunities for participation to teachers because she is bound by ministerial decrees. We may make unsound decisions that would lead to mistakes and then sanctions will apply to the whole administrative staff including the head teacher and the deputy heads. Hence, sharing does not happen, simply because everybody is concerned about his/her own safety" 02 b 0-
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