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Sonam Tshering Posted 13 years ago
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I worked in the Royal Government of Bhutan for over half a decade before leaving for higher studies in Japan in 2007. My research interests include but not limited to handling missing data, design and analysis of Quality of Life (QoL) studies, constructing socio-economic indicators, causal modeling, web services and predictive analytics. I also conducts scientific research on psycho-socio-economic data to discover meaningful patterns through the application of statistics, computer programming and operational research.
  

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Here are some suggestions: I worked in the Royal Government of Bhutan for over half a decade before leaving for higher (post-graduate? ) studies in Japan in 2007. My research interests include but are not limited to handling missing data, design and analysis of Quality of Life (QoL) studies, constructing socio-economic indicators, causal modeling, web services and predictive analytics.

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  • Here are some suggestions: I worked in the Royal Government of Bhutan for over half a decade before leaving for higher (post-graduate?
  • ) studies in Japan in 2007.
  • My research interests include but are not limited to handling missing data, design and analysis of Quality of Life (QoL) studies, constructing socio-economic indicators, causal modeling, web services and predictive analytics.
  • I also conducts (subject-verb mismatch) scientific research on psycho-socio-economic data to discover meaningful patterns through the application of statistics, computer programming and operational research.
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I worked in the Royal Government of Bhutan for over half a decade before leaving for higher (post-graduate? graduate?) studies in Japan in 2007. My research interests include but are not limited to handling missing data, design and analysis of Quality of Life (QoL) studies, constructing socio-economic
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"Over half a decade" is damning yourself with faint praise. "Five years" is straighter.
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enoon"Over half a decade" is damning yourself with faint praise. "Five years" is straighter.
True, and the motley list of technical subjects, does not contribute much confidence either. But I tried to stick to the grammatical issues in the text.
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AlpheccaStars enoon"Over half a decade" is damning yourself with faint praise. "Five years" is straighter.True, and the motley list of technical subjects, does not contribute much confidence either. But I tried to stick to the grammatical issues in the text.
Right. But I often wonder whether there aren't cultural differences between the English-speaking world
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Noted all points, thanks a lot.
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