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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Please check this sentences for me.. !! urgent.. help!!

As the holiday season approach, we’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for your support by present a small gift to appreciated your continued partnership with us and may the gifts be like a watch dog for your premises and family
  

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As the holiday season approaches , we’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for your support by giving you a small gift in appreciation of your continued partnership with us . May the gift be a watch dog for your premises and family. The second sentence is very strange unless the gift is a burglar alarm.

  • As the holiday season approaches , we’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for your support by giving you a small gift in appreciation of your continued partnership with us .
  • May the gift be a watch dog for your premises and family.
  • The second sentence is very strange unless the gift is a burglar alarm.
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As the holiday season approaches, we’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for your support by giving you a small gift in appreciation of your continued partnership with us. May the gift be a watch dog for your premises and family.

The second sentence is very strange unless the gift is a burglar alarm.

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