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Mgwattoo Posted 11 years ago
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Normally, modern phones hang somewhere in between 65 to 75 percent screen-to-body ratio. After so many years companies are still struggling to keep bezels narrow. Come on, stop selling these ugly devices with huge bezels, and give consumers a phone with over 90 percent screen-to-body ratio and let us praise your aesthetic sense once, for a change.
  

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Everything in the text is correct, and very well-written if you're a non-native speaker. The use of the verb "hang" is a little unusual by US standards, but it's understandable. Also, the word "bezel" is a technical term with several interpretations, and a person unfamiliar with it might not be able to visualize what you're describing.

  • Everything in the text is correct, and very well-written if you're a non-native speaker.
  • The use of the verb "hang" is a little unusual by US standards, but it's understandable.
  • Also, the word "bezel" is a technical term with several interpretations, and a person unfamiliar with it might not be able to visualize what you're describing.
  • "Screen-to-body ratio" might also be confusing to a non-technical reader.
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Everything in the text is correct, and very well-written if you're a non-native speaker. The use of the verb "hang" is a little unusual by US standards, but it's understandable. Also, the word "bezel" is a technical term with several interpretations, and a person unfamiliar with it might not be able to visualize what you're describing. "Screen-to-body ratio" might also be confusing to a non-tec

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