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Debarghya Posted 11 years ago
Business & Finance
Please check this sentence.......
(a document)It provides the information on total time spent by the workers in the factory on the basis of which wages is paid to the workers where method of remuneration is on time basis.
Please check my sentence construction, is this correct? & check my grammatical mistakes.
Please check my sentence construction, is this correct? & check my grammatical mistakes.
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It is far too wordy; this is sufficient: It indicates the total time spent by the factory workers, on the basis of which wages are paid.
- It is far too wordy; this is sufficient: It indicates the total time spent by the factory workers, on the basis of which wages are paid.
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It is far too wordy; this is sufficient:
It indicates the total time spent by the factory workers, on the basis of which wages are paid.
It indicates the total time spent by the factory workers, on the basis of which wages are paid.
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