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S.P.I. Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please check this sentence:

The Happiest Days of our LIves is an amazing song, every kid that grew up here and hit the local schools would be able to relate to it.


Is the sentence correct?

Thanks.
  

Top answer

Hi, It's two sentences incorrectly joined by a comma. This is often called 'a run-on sentence. Say The Happiest Days of our LIves is an amazing song.

— Clive

  • Hi, It's two sentences incorrectly joined by a comma.
  • This is often called 'a run-on sentence.
  • Say The Happiest Days of our LIves is an amazing song.
  • Every kid that grew up here and hit the local schools would be able to relate to it.
  • You could also consider putting the name in quotes.
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Hi,

It's two sentences incorrectly joined by a comma. This is often called 'a run-on sentence.

Say

The Happiest Days of our LIves is an amazing song. Every kid that grew up here and hit the local schools would be able to relate to it.

You could also consider putting the name in quotes.


Best wishes, Clive
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