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Canonman Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please check this sentence!

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Try: I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee. Please let me know if you want to hang out or even if you would rather be left alone. , sounding less like a stalker): I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee.

  • Try: I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee.
  • Please let me know if you want to hang out or even if you would rather be left alone.
  • , sounding less like a stalker): I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee.
  • Please let me know your decision.
  • Chris
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Try:

I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee. Please let me know if you want to hang out or even if you would rather be left alone.

Or better (i.e., sounding less like a stalker):

I really enjoyed your company, and I hope we can hang out some other time and have coffee. Please let me know your decision.

Chris
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So my first attempt is bad grammatically?
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Just some minor corrections. My second suggestion was because I didn't quite like the original second sentence. IMHO, it is just better to say "Please let me know your decision" than "If you want to go out, please let me know. But if you want to be left alone, please let me know too."

Chris

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