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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
please check this sentence!!!
<Massacre proceeds rapidly and is indiscriminate.>
is this sentence unnatural?
and,
<Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid>
how about this sentence instead?
and if there are any other decent sentence meaning that, let me know plz
and, one more.
I'm trying to make a sentence meaing "They could take an action and they should have taken an action"
and I'd like to have this sentece short. how about "they could take an action and should have done that"
or what else?
is this sentence unnatural?
and,
<Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid>
how about this sentence instead?
and if there are any other decent sentence meaning that, let me know plz
and, one more.
I'm trying to make a sentence meaing "They could take an action and they should have taken an action"
and I'd like to have this sentece short. how about "they could take an action and should have done that"
or what else?
Top answer
Massacre proceeds rapidly and is indiscriminate. Perfectly acceptable - it means Massacre proceeds rapidly and massacre is indiscriminate. Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid Probably needs a comma, to separate the main statement from the additional information.
- Massacre proceeds rapidly and is indiscriminate.
- Perfectly acceptable - it means Massacre proceeds rapidly and massacre is indiscriminate.
- Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid Probably needs a comma, to separate the main statement from the additional information.
- For example: Massacre is indiscriminate, with its rate of progress being rapid.
- They could take an action and they should have taken an action Saying 'an action' implies a specific action, perhaps from a small list of possible actions.
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Massacre proceeds rapidly and is indiscriminate.
Perfectly acceptable - it means Massacre proceeds rapidly and massacre is indiscriminate.
Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid
Probably needs a comma, to separate the main statement from the additional information. For example:
Massacre is indiscriminate, with
Perfectly acceptable - it means Massacre proceeds rapidly and massacre is indiscriminate.
Massacre is indiscriminate with its rate of progress being rapid
Probably needs a comma, to separate the main statement from the additional information. For example:
Massacre is indiscriminate, with
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