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Flower1234 Posted 14 years ago
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I have not been able to get hold of Mary. I left Mary a message three days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, one in the morning and one after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. She may be away on holidays.
  

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Hi, I have not been able to get hold of Mary. I left Mary a message three days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. , and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message.

— Clive

  • Hi, I have not been able to get hold of Mary.
  • I left Mary a message three days ago and till now I have not received a call from her.
  • , and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message.
  • She may be away on holidays.
  • Here are a few edits.
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Hi,

I have not been able to get hold of Mary. I left Mary a message three days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, one in the morning and one after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. She may be away on holidays.

Here are a few edits.
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