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Jemmali Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please, check this paragraph
Hello every body, could you please check this paragraph:
I’am an enginer graduated in june 2008 from the engineering school (a well renowned and respected institution), I was worked as heavy equipments maintenance engineer in a cement factory and since January 2010, I work as an engineer at the department of construction of high way in a Tunisian company.
Throughout thes two expeiences , I have consistently been promoted to increasing levels of responsibility, which fostered the development of my leadership skills.
Your company has a long history of providing the highest quality products , and has an excellent reputation, I look forward to work with you in order to deploy your brand in my country and beyond the whole continent while working with clarity, confidence and commitment.
I’am an enginer graduated in june 2008 from the engineering school (a well renowned and respected institution), I was worked as heavy equipments maintenance engineer in a cement factory and since January 2010, I work as an engineer at the department of construction of high way in a Tunisian company.
Throughout thes two expeiences , I have consistently been promoted to increasing levels of responsibility, which fostered the development of my leadership skills.
Your company has a long history of providing the highest quality products , and has an excellent reputation, I look forward to work with you in order to deploy your brand in my country and beyond the whole continent while working with clarity, confidence and commitment.
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I am an enginer graduated in J une 2008 from a a well renowned engineering institution. I have worked as a H eavy E quipment M aintenance E ngineer in a cement factory. And since January 2010, I have been working as an engineer at the D epartment of C onstruction of H ighway in a Tunisian company.
- I am an enginer graduated in J une 2008 from a a well renowned engineering institution.
- I have worked as a H eavy E quipment M aintenance E ngineer in a cement factory.
- And since January 2010, I have been working as an engineer at the D epartment of C onstruction of H ighway in a Tunisian company.
- Throughout my service in the two organisations, I have been regularly promoted to more and more responsible positions.
- This has fostered the development of my leadership skills.
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I am an enginer graduated in June 2008 from a a well renowned engineering institution. I have worked as a Heavy Equipment Maintenance Engineer in a cement factory. And since January 2010, I have been working as an engineer at the Department of Construction of Highway in a Tunisian company. Throug
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