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JCDenton Posted 18 years ago
Vocabulary

Please check this one sentence for me.

Hi guys,
my mother is studying an education pedagogy university and she asked me to translate the name of her dissertation into english...I've translated that name into this.
Social pathologic phenomena by unemployed adolescents without qualification and their job exercise in our city.

Please guys, check this one sentence for me. Especially, I'm not sure with that preposition by unemployed
many thanks in advance

Best Regards
JCD
  

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anyway, I think you need a verb in there. also - without qualification s 'their job exercise' makes no sense to me I'm afraid. Do you mean adolescents without qualifications or a job?

— Nona the brit

  • anyway, I think you need a verb in there.
  • also - without qualification s 'their job exercise' makes no sense to me I'm afraid.
  • Do you mean adolescents without qualifications or a job?
  • You've already covered that with 'unemployed'.
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'phenomena by' doesn't really work ...perhaps phenomena exhibited/enacted by...anyway, I think you need a verb in there.

also - without qualifications

'their job exercise' makes no sense to me I'm afraid. Do you mean adolescents without qualifications or a job? You've already covered that with 'unemployed'.
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Hi Nona,
many thanks for answer.
nona the britDo you mean adolescents without qualifications or a job? You've already covered that with 'unemployed'.

That adolescents are without qualification and in addition they don't have a job. I just called my mom whether she meant that in this way and she confirmed it.
nona the brit't
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JCDentonTheir employability in the work process / their usability in the work process....?...Is this better?

I'm still thinking about that appropriate word....I mean, when I'm looking for the job which is suitable for my skills and I can't find that one (this is that case of that adolescents)......How would you call it? I can't
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Hi

My suggestion:

The social pathological phenomena of unqualified, unemployed adolescents and their (job suitability) / (suitability in the job market) in our city.
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Perfect! Thanks Opti! [Y]
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