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To whom it may concern.
I am writing this letter in order to apply for the student mobility program for the period Jan/Jun 2014.
Currently I’m a first year student for the degree of Master in Business Informatics and I really want to expand and to deepen my knowledge.
As you can see from my CV and Academic Transcript, starting from admission to the XXX in 2007, I have been trying to do my best in learning of selected profession that is inseparably connected with information technologies. However, the same attention I’ve been paying to the improvement of social and leadership skills, participating actively in the social life of the University as well as in different event and organizations of XX, trying to be useful for society what I live in.
While being on the 4-th year of education, I started to participate in the XX Government’s program for the youth entrepreneurship development. At that time I had surely realized about what I want to do in my future.
Just after graduating the University in 2012 I had applied to the program of Master in Business Informatics in the same University to get acquainted with business tools in the sphere of information technologies at the academic level. Currently I have started working on my Master’s thesis work, dedicated to the topic that I have been exploring for 2 years already-optimization of business processes by the biometric timekeeping system. Such a system allows to minimize expenses from time waste of employees.
After graduating the University I’m going to establish my own business on integrating this powerful tool for optimization of management work to other organizations.
However, I understand that besides knowledge of activity scope, good communication skills and organizational experience I need additional knowledge in the field of management as well.
And now I’m really glad, that partnership of Politecnico di Milano and XXX provides students with such great opportunities for personal and professional growth.
While making a decision of applying for the student mobility program, I have learned carefully and compared different Master’s educational programs that are similar to the mine one. And I have chosen yours one almost immediately due to few factors. First of all, it is positive experience of my familiar. Another one is quality of educational programs that you provide. Also I have already been in Milano about year ago, discovering the ancient history and architecture of city. I liked it all very much to return for some long period here. I have chosen Master in Management Engineering. Speaking about educational program it is necessary to notice that most of all I’m interested in course of “Management of innovation” because I want to get European experience in adoption of new technologies. The same interest causes course of ”Cross-boundary processes” because of its practical direction and significance for understanding of entrepreneurship with international partners.
Another one is course of “Business strategy’ that on my opinion can influence greatly on understanding of business principles.
So, one of goals for applying the student mobility program is to complete my Master’s thesis work with useful information, gained while studying in your University.
I want to apply acquainted in Milano knowledge in my country, and sometime after I dream to apply this knowledge and my experience to open business on ancient motherland of my ancestries-Armenia, the same time developing contacts of Italian, Armenian and Russian business community.
I see education on the Master in Management Engineering as an investment to reach my goals.
If you require any additional materials or information, I am glad to supply it. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
N.S.