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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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The Transfer of Ownership

I, John Stowell of 2615 State highway Ashburton, Canterbury sold Acer Aspire 1200 series laptop bearing serial # ______________________________________________ to Mr. Jacob Williams on the (Date) __________ at Emotion: time ____________. I hereby declare the laptop was legitimately owned by me (Mr. John Sotwell) .

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Signatory of the seller Signatory of the Buyer

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Signatory of the witness
  

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Looks ok apart from 'signatory'. You need the word 'signature' instead. (signatory is a term for the person who signs, not the actual signature).

  • Looks ok apart from 'signatory'.
  • You need the word 'signature' instead.
  • (signatory is a term for the person who signs, not the actual signature).
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Looks ok apart from 'signatory'. You need the word 'signature' instead. (signatory is a term for the person who signs, not the actual signature).

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