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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I’m so happy to know that my candidature presents interest for you and I’m confident that you will be satisfied with my work. My name is …….. . I’m 21 years old . I ‘m a citizen of ……… . I was born in a pituresque village of…….. where I spent all my childhood and completed high school . After that I moved to the capital, the city of ……… and obtained high education at the college of informatics. Now, I’m a student in distant education in the faculty of Management and Right at the University of……. My wish is to become a specialist in the field of custom housing. I like very much children and in the period of education I worked with success as a nanny . Since I was young I have liked to spend my time with children also with neighbor’s childen , to play and take care of them, as I’m from good and united family . I felt from my mother and grandparents a lot of tenderness and car. I am a sincere ,amicable and intelligent person . My mother has cultivated in me the sense of care and responsability to other people . In every event where there are children I am always in the center of attention . All children love me because they feel affection and love toward them . I can’t imagine my life without children . I lead a healthy way of living, every morning I do gymnastics and in the evening I practise running . I eat correctly, only natural and fresh products , which consist vitamins and minerals . At school , I played in a volley and football teams. Also I attended dance and drama classes and thea. I like to read a lot : biography , fairy-tales, fantastic and also I prefer history of Greece and Egypt . I decided to participate in the program au-pair with the following qualities: - I like children and I like to communicate witth them ; - I’m a responsable and attentive person - I don’t have bad habits - I am good cool very well also I like to embroidering and ironing . I would like to visit your country as an Au-Pairbecause I prefer the national spirit and rich history of your country . I have visited Bulgaria , Russia and Ukraine a sa a tourist and after that a great interest appeared to visit other countries. I wish to get an education and to improve my language skills, to know better your traditions and culture. Thank you very much for your attention and I hope that my candidature will interest you . You can get in touch with me by email: Or by telephone number
  

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You should make sensible paragraphs and character spacing. The text is quite awkward in places, but for now, I will mark the glaring errors. I’m so happy to know that my candidature presents interest for you and I’m confident that you will be satisfied with my work.

  • You should make sensible paragraphs and character spacing.
  • The text is quite awkward in places, but for now, I will mark the glaring errors.
  • I’m so happy to know that my candidature presents interest for you and I’m confident that you will be satisfied with my work.
  • My name is ……..
  • I’m 21 years old .
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You should make sensible paragraphs and character spacing. The text is quite awkward in places, but for now, I will mark the glaring errors.

I’m so happy to know that my candidature presents interest for you and I’m confident that you will be satisfied with my work. My name is …….. . I’m 21 years old . I ‘m a citizen of ……… . I was born in a pituresque village of…….. where I spent all my
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AnonymousI’m so happy to know that my candidature presents interest for you
I’m so happy to know that my candidature interests you
AnonymousI was born in a pituresque village of……..
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Anonymous I am very happy
Put a full stop at the end, please.
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Today i am very happy.
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Anonymous Today i am very happy.
Today I would be happy if all posters learned that " i " is not a valid English word.
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Oh, burn!
All though many people think it's okay to write 'i' instead of 'I'. It's not.
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Either is "all though." It's "although." Although, many people think it's okay to write "i" instead of "I." It's not.
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A letter should have 2 - 3 paragraphs and not be an essay. Contact details at the top, and/ or beneath signature, not in the body.

first paragraph: The vacancy for an Au Pair has come to my attention and I believe that I will be an excellent candidate. [3 reasons why, e.g. experieince with children, patience, champion of healthy body & healthy mind]

I am very interested in moving

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