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Kanonathena Posted 17 years ago
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Please check this letter
Dear Sir,
I am interested in the graduate accountant position advertised on the Careerhub website. My resume and academic transcript are enclosed for your review.
I graduated from university of Tasmania this December with a bachelor degree in accounting and finance. Currently, I am looking for opportunities to gain more knowledge and experience in accounting profession. On the academic side, I have good grasp of accounting knowledge I have learned; on the personal side, I am eager to learn and have strong incentives to excel in what I do.
I hope to have an opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I could contribute to your team.
I just wrote this letter for an accountant job openning. Can somene give me suggestions on how to improve it? (especially the sentence in bold)
Thank you.
I am interested in the graduate accountant position advertised on the Careerhub website. My resume and academic transcript are enclosed for your review.
I graduated from university of Tasmania this December with a bachelor degree in accounting and finance. Currently, I am looking for opportunities to gain more knowledge and experience in accounting profession. On the academic side, I have good grasp of accounting knowledge I have learned; on the personal side, I am eager to learn and have strong incentives to excel in what I do.
I hope to have an opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I could contribute to your team.
I just wrote this letter for an accountant job openning. Can somene give me suggestions on how to improve it? (especially the sentence in bold)
Thank you.
Top answer
I graduated from the U niversity of Tasmania this December with a B achelor D egree in accounting and finance. Currently, I am looking for opportunities to gain more knowledge and experience in an accounting profession. On the academic side, I feel I have a good grasp of accounting and would like the opportunity to become an asset to your company.
- I graduated from the U niversity of Tasmania this December with a B achelor D egree in accounting and finance.
- Currently, I am looking for opportunities to gain more knowledge and experience in an accounting profession.
- On the academic side, I feel I have a good grasp of accounting and would like the opportunity to become an asset to your company.
- knowledge I have learned ; on the personal side, I am eager to learn and have strong incentives to excel in what I do .
- ,am a team player and feel I could bring the knowledge I have to good use with Careerhub.
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I graduated from the University of Tasmania this December with a Bachelor Degree in accounting and finance. Currently, I am looking for opportunities to gain more knowledge and experience in an accounting profession. On the academic side, I feel I have a good grasp of accounting and would like the opportunity to become an asset to
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