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Hi teachers, please check this for me. Is it natural English? Would you write it differently? Please let me know. Thanks in advance.
I walked up to the counter where sandwiches, pizza slices, pastries etc. were showcased. I looked at the selection for a long time, then decided on a chicken salad.
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It's good informal English, except "showcase" is a bit grand for your meaning. The punctuation is wrong: I walked up to the glass case full of sandwiches, pizza slices, pastries, etc. I looked at the selection for a long time, then decided on a chicken salad.
- It's good informal English, except "showcase" is a bit grand for your meaning.
- The punctuation is wrong: I walked up to the glass case full of sandwiches, pizza slices, pastries, etc.
- I looked at the selection for a long time, then decided on a chicken salad.
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It's good informal English, except "showcase" is a bit grand for your meaning. The punctuation is wrong:
I walked up to the glass case full of sandwiches, pizza slices, pastries, etc. I looked at the selection for a long time, then decided on a chicken salad.
0anonymousI walked up to the counter where sandwiches, pizza slices, and pastriesetc.wereshowcaseddisplayed. I looked at the selections for a long time, then decided on a chicken salad.
I'd write it as sho
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