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Mankka Posted 9 years ago
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The pie charts depict the quantity of different types of books sold between 1972 and 2000.

Overall, it is immediately apparent that while the figures for adult fiction and children’s fiction followed upward trends during the given period, the number of books sold from biography and others decreased significantly.

In 1972, other types earned the most preference, at 25%. The middle group includes adult fiction, children’s fiction and biography with no difference among the members. Meanwhile, the number of travel books sold ends the list with 15%. In 1992, the sales of adult fiction increased to 25% and became the most popular, whereas the figures for others and biography saw drops of 5%. 18% of the readers purchased travel books, compared to 22% from children’s fiction ones.

In 2012, the sales of adult fiction headed the list with 45%, followed by children’s fiction at 25%. There is only 2% difference among others, travel and biography in third to fifth places in terms of sales figures.

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Please fix the errors in your previous essays before you post something new.

It is important to learn from your mistakes. Then you might not repeat the same errors in future essays.

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The pie charts depict the quantity of different types of books sold between 1972 and 2000. (That is not an accurate description .)

Overall, it is immediately apparent that (unnecessary verbiage) while the figures for adult fiction and children’s fiction followed upward trends during the given period, (It is not a continuous period, so you cannot s

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