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Essay
The graphs illustrate the number of British graduate and postgraduate students participating in a variety of work, excluding full-time one in 2008. Overall, the percentage of students engaging to voluntary work, undertaking further study and even being unemployed are similar for both graduate and postgraduate students, whereas this number for students getting part-time jobs is remarkably diverse.
For UK graduates, further study after leaving college is the most destination of 29,665 students, nearly doubled the number of the unemployed at 16,235 students. With a similar amount to the unemployment, 17,735 students considered part-time jobs. Meanwhile, only 3,500 graduate students took part in voluntary work, contributing to the lowest selection.
In contrast, most postgraduates decided to undertake further study, reached to 2,725 students in 2008. For these students, part-time work is regarded as the second choice when 2,535 of them choosing it, much more higher than this figure of unemployment at 1,625. However, the lowest options for postgraduates went without change for voluntary work at 345 students that year.